Thursday, May 23, 2013

Chapter 5: Aqua Evolution (or not?)

The Pokemon woke up at 12:00 AM, which is the time they should be awake. Umbreon hopped in the window. "Hey, guys! Seems like you woke up late!" Said Umbreon. "Yup." Said Serin, nodding. At that time, a girl with redish-pinkish hair that stayed back, and a boy with blue hair going kind of down, and a cat-like Pokemon with a coin on it's head appeared. The girl and boy also had an "R" on their shirts. "Hmm, James, we found us a place that looks like it has Pokemon in it." Said the girl. "Meowth that's right!" Said the cat-like Pokemon. "Hmm, Meowth, go investigate. And Jessie,  stay with me." Said James. "Okay!" Said Meowth, racing towards their window. Their trainer was coming, but it was too late. They were in cages, and in a truck. There were a bunch of Pokemon saying things like "I want to go home!" and "I miss the other Pokemon!" and stuff like that. Meowth was watching them, making sure they won't escape. "Hmm, it's bumpy. Better check on Jessie and James." Said Meowth, leaving the room. Some Pokemon were attacking the cage, and the number of Pokemon attacking the cage was so large that Serin even found herself and her freinds doing it. "I want my trainer!" Yelled an Oshawott, throwing himself on the floor. Everyone was missing their trainer or other Pokemon. When Meowth walked back in, Melenie used Leech Seed on him, and plants grew around his legs and Meowth couldn't move. "Come on! We have this plan to escape!" Shouted both heads of Zweilous. "Oh no you don't!" Said Meowth, still not untangled from the plants. Meowth tripped, and that Oshawott who screamed sprayed water at Meowth. "This plan is turning out good!" Said Umbreon. Melenie used Leaf Tornado on Meowth. A Ralts used Psychic on Meowth and flung him to the wall. The Ralts also used Psychic on his cage door to open it. He started helping out the others. All the other Pokemon with Psychic helped. Soon everyone was free. "The only problem is, how do we get out of the truck?" Said Sparky. "Easy." Said a Crustle, breaking the wall with Rock Wrecker.  Everyone cheered and ran out, flew out, or jumped out.
Author's Note: EVERYONE BUT PERRY MISSED THIS PART XD

3 comments:

  1. Um....I have to say, this is similar to one of my chapters where they get captured. This is considered stealing, because I did not approve. This is a different story, with a different shiny Umbreon.

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  2. well, you are right. but i have no idea what your's escape plan is. i thought about it and thought team rocket should come soon

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  3. This is very similar, and maybe you could've done something different. It was the same as when Umbreon was caught in a cage and thrown into a truck.
    Please, do something different.

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